Join the conversation on IDNLearn.com and get the answers you seek from experts. Join our interactive Q&A community and get reliable, detailed answers from experienced professionals across a variety of topics.
Which sentence below uses an action
verb to make its meaning more concise?
A. The carnival ride was making noises as it went around
faster and faster as the riders screamed.
B. The carnival ride was going around fast and making
machine noises while the riders were screaming.
C. The carnival ride went around and around and made
mechanical noises while riders screamed.
D. The carnival ride whirled and whirred to the screams
of the electrified, terrified riders.
